Endless Horizon

Feedback time! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="577" title="La la la la"/> I have to say that I really love the pose,the colors and the composition. Tough, im more going to talk about anatomy here, the overall is quite nice, but there is something about kady's face that kinda seems... off... well im not sure if this is your style or something but her eyes kinda looks derpy and it ruined a bit the epic impact on me. The eyes are symetric but a bit too big and the muzzle is assymetrical which makes it look derpy to me. Other than that im going to explain the rest part by part,

Vision: Like I said the composition is really good ^^

Originality : This is something I haven't seen alot so I will definitly give you a high score here >u<

Technique : I know this is a style and all but let's face It I think it could look even better, why don't you try drawing some scale? But other than that I really love the colors and the cell-shading is awsome <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="577" title="La la la la"/>

Impact: I get what kind of feeling you where trying to show trough your artwork, but again, some things can make you snap out of it....


I think that's all.... hope I wasen't too harsh, but helpfull ( I can feel knifes pointed at me XC ) By the way I really whant to see more of your comic ;3;